First Jeff, I like your title; unfortunately that's the only unique thing about your lyric.
I know, it's hard to find phrases and ideas that haven't been done, but it's worth the time in the long run.
When you finish a lyric or song, ask yourself: What will make this song stand out above all the other songs a publisher receives on his desk at any given day?
Try to be specific. Instead of saying ...now you've gone away, SHOW the audience HOW. In a plane, car, bus, train? Morning noon or night? Rainy or sunny? Be as visual as possible.
Good luck
Posted on Mar 23, 2000, 3:56 AM from IP address 206.65.216.18
