.....would be to try and rewrite the song without saying "guilt" or "guilty" anywhere in the verses. You say it too much as it is now, and not using the word except in the chorus will free up your imagination to express the same thoughts in a more creative, interesting way.
Hope I could help. See what others think.
Posted on Mar 23, 2000, 4:34 PM from IP address 136.1.1.101