I think you've got a good start on a tear jerker here. I wasn't sure about the sudden reference to the ring? Didn't see where that was introduced earlier on. Is this intended for a female, that's how I heard it. Only other suggestions, is paint some pictures in the storyline, that would really make us feel for this gal. Good luck with it. Colleen
Posted on Mar 24, 2000, 7:14 AM from IP address 209.240.216.66