Put it back in the oven for a while Stan

Needs a bit more cookin' this one.
The we don't smile real often too line is a bit lumpy and sticks out as a forced rhyme.
Th rolling in the dust does the same as I see it.
Graham

Posted on Mar 30, 2000, 4:49 PM
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