Missing a few key components

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Chorus and bridge plaese apply.
Good to see you back. You add your own special shadow to the group :')
In agreement with other comments you have a bunch of verses that have to be connected.
I have problem with the following: It's double faced.

So again, I face the harsh world
Again I face the pain
No, I still ain't smiling
As I head out into the rain

I suggest changing the first line to read:

So again, I race the harsh world

Vic



Posted on Apr 6, 2000, 10:56 PM
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