Like this, but you seem to be wasting some lines by repeating practically the same ones in verses, which isn't usually done in a verse chorus song.
(This verse is fine):
You've Hardened Your heart
Over Things I Did Wrong,
That's the Hardest Part, Because
My LOVE Stayed STRONG...
(I'd come up with some fresher lines in this verse):
Your Heart's Stayed Hardened
Over Things I Did Wrong
I Feel "I've Earned a Pardon"
Since My LOVE Stayed STRONG...
"Good" luck with it
Posted on Apr 9, 2000, 2:12 AM from IP address 206.65.217.6
