Okay, first off!!! "Warning" I don't think of myself as a very good critic, that's why ya'll don't see me critique very much here, but I'll try because you all do critique what I post and fair is fair, so..... here goes....... I like the lyric but, I didn't like the word "freak" in it. Don't know why but, it just didn''t fit. I know what you're saying but, it just seems to strong here and it kind of gives reason for why this person can't find love(being the freak that he'she is) maybe if you left "freak" in there and explained why the person is such a freak. The rest was great! It's just "freak" didn't fit.... to me. Don't get mad!! I already told you I'm not so great at this!! Take care, Sue
Posted on Apr 11, 2000, 8:54 AM from IP address 209.214.130.155