I haven't read the critiques you've gotten thus far-- I wanted to keep a fresh perspective. Overall, this is nice, but the one problem I noticed is that the verses have a novelty-song feel while the chorus doesn't. In fact, the lyrics of the chorus could fit quite well in a dour song about the passage of time.
Speaking of time-- congrats on the $3K GFC sale! Frankly, I'm amazed you do decent business, since GFCs aren't exactly something the average person buys a lot of in their lifetime.
Posted on Apr 13, 2000, 6:38 AM from IP address 216.40.148.149