Boy do I love picking on first lines Susan.

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Just Kidding but a bottle of wine is never half empty. A wine bottle can be half empty though and am sure that would work.
It seems to flow along good. Second line in the verses seemed to be one sillybilly down to the way i had it going.
Wonder if it wouldn't be a good idea to invert the holding on to nothing thing in the chorus ends.
Yeah is pretty good.
Graham



Posted on Apr 18, 2000, 11:13 AM
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