My Gegenshein (Rewrite, please critique and Thank-you!)

My Gegenschein
Š2000 Judy Maness

Verse 1
Come to me, nightglow of my dreams
Please don't faint and shy away
Why must you always bow and fade?
Why do you dim and hide?

Chorus
My Gegenschein:
Must the light chase you away
My Gegenschein:
The night must keep you in its wake
My Gegenschein:
You lure and shy away

Your glow unveils a bridal song
By night my Gegenschein

Verse 2
You are mantled so discretly
Chastened by the Milky Way
Like a virgin pure and sweetly
Veiled by night's obscuring haze

Chorus

Verse 3
Your shadow's shade could I cherish
May I treasure this delight?
When again you move to greet me
My counter glow in darkest night

Chorus

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Your glow unveils a bridal song
By night my Gegenschein

Posted on Apr 21, 2000, 9:56 AM
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