But, it's very repetitious. The verses don't progess to new and different ideas. I wonder if you are writing to Arnold's rigid lyric form...? And, the word "dear" definitely bothers me, as condescending to the listener...JMO/ thanks for your opinions on my stuff. I think you're right about the bridge. Glen.
Posted on Apr 28, 2000, 11:15 AM from IP address 12.5.48.21
Glen.