The big one for me is I would use then time changed in the chorus first time up to make it flow on better.
First verse I would use What I wanted. I always got. Seems clumsy the way yuo got it. Unnatural.
And always felt I's loved a lot for a follower sounds beter to me.
I do not like the lot and got sound at all for a verse end I better add.
Graham
Posted on Apr 29, 2000, 9:10 PM from IP address 206.135.142.18