This is a real cute one. I can picture a young and upcoming Artist singing this one.
I'd cut out a few words here and there, some condensing. And perhaps cut the Woman- Real Live Woman bit, Tricia has a hit right now with those exact words too. Your storyline is different enough to stand on it's own otherwise imho.
Best of luck with it,
Colleen
Posted on Apr 29, 2000, 11:14 PM from IP address 209.240.200.147