Also, I'm not sure about the Rosemarie thing, maybe need to make the chorus more generic and say something about her stealing his heart. Maybe try to incorporate vs 2 into the chorus and work on the verses some more to give us a little more background about where he met this girl and what she did to steal his heart and why she left.
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