Hi There Gary, Welcome to the club, The story has been done a few time Gary, and you have a few problems with Accentuated Rythmn,
If you look at my critique of Brenda's song
and compare it with your own lyrics,
I am afraid the same problems apply.
Plenty of good promise here , And you should keep posting.
The bigest problem you would have with this
subject is finding a quality Artist or Band to record it. It is a Hairy old subject , that
AEROSMITH tackled in a brilliant way.
Anyhow keep writing and let us see some
of your other lyrics.
Best Wishes
Peter Kristian
Posted on May 6, 2000, 9:24 AM from IP address 213.36.45.36