I can appreciate your religious convictions
you are a very dedicated writer, but why do you use Old English, the Holy Bible is a very
old book and you are using phrases that were written some 2000 plus years ago. If you are trying to convert people to your religious
beliefs, why do you not write in a language that
people of today can understand ?
That apart I dont see any connection between
your opening line verse one, with what follows
it. It seems to me like a jumble of statements
written by someone else and lifted into this song
So in verse Two you are saying that there is no
hope for people who have strayed away from
the religious path, well that is not what I have been taught. This is very mixed up
and I dont see the point of writing it unless
it is purely something you feel you need to do
for the guilt of the way you may have lived
before you found religion.
I am very puzzled by your writing, and dont suppose I will even get a response.
Yours Peter Kristian
Posted on May 8, 2000, 4:06 PM from IP address 213.36.45.68