Like It Was Yesterday

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Hi Wayne,
Nice message....my minor nits below:

LIKE IT WAS YESTERDAY

Verse

Day after day has passed (by..delete) and gone
Good memories never go away
They (just..delete) seem to hang on and on
(To me..delete) day after day

refrain

The day we wed was so long ago
Yet the image never fade(d..change to 's') away
(add..It)Still lingers in my mind
(I can see it,..delete) like it was yesterday

Love songs we sang, church bells that rang
On the altar where we knelt to pray
All the glory that was ours
(I..change to Still) recall (it all,..delete)like it was yesterday

Taught our children love and respect
Watched them grow, (sent them on their way..agree w/ suggestions given already)
Thoughts of our love, hope stays in their minds
To remember us , like it was yesterday

Copyright 2000 Wayne Evans

That's it, keep or sweep. Keep writing Wayne!!!




Posted on May 12, 2000, 1:18 AM
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