Now you are cooking Wayne

by Graham

 

Couple of points still but is close.
Graham
(Are)(It's) the fond memories we share(d) (in)(of) the past.
Yet the image of (our love)(that day still) (has) stay(ed)
Each time our child was ready to be born
I 'd turn the color pale gray
When you said i'm ready to go now dear
I remember like it was yesterday.
(Nice but clumsy Wayne. Each time our child is singular. How many time was that child born?
Do something with the gray Mate. Not good.)
Let's hope they rember our love,when we're gone
(I would use this line to say we ar prouud of how they grew mayme. Get away from the fall of the perch thing)
You are going to hate me before this is done Wayne.
Graham





Posted on May 15, 2000, 6:37 PM
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