Interesting story

Hey Jim,

We all have to write those stories that come to mind every now and then, and Commercial or not thanks for sharing.
Keep writing,

Colleen
PS-I think you could revise this from verse III and forward, to a song about a Big brother and make it commercial<smile>

Posted on May 16, 2000, 4:39 PM
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