Order in the Court...

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Hi Colleen!

I like everything about this Song Except the Bridge...it's too Abrupt an "Update"/ doesn't thoroughly both get the Idea Across she's (Matured to be) a Judge...OR that "Judgeship's" an acceptible "Substitute" for the Childhood Dreams that Never came true, assuming they Didn't (Exactly...) & she's still "Wheelchair-Bound".

But maybe that's Life, eh?

Perhaps a Longer, more-detailled Bridge can clear this all up?

KUDOS, otherwise...very Reality-Based "Introspetive!"

Good Job on a Tough Subject!
Stan



Posted on May 16, 2000, 7:54 PM
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