I don't have much time, so I'll be blunt-- this song bores me. There's no drama or tension in it, though the lyrics make it seem like there should be. A guy singing a song about how he remembers being in love on his wedding day should be a guy lamenting the fact that it's gone now. To put it another way, there's no reason for the guy to think back to how he used to be so in love if he's still in love the same way today. It's needless for you, as a songwriter, to have this guy dwell on the past for nearly the whole song. Besides, I would think that most people would have a fairly vivid recollection of their wedding day, whether the marriage panned out or not. So take this with a grain of salt if you want, but this song failed to grab me. Good luck with it, though.
Posted on May 17, 2000, 5:17 AM from IP address 216.40.148.155