You can get rid of the key confusion by using the ramp more effectivly:
Ramp
And as we drove along like a country song
That strong feeling overtook me:
(As we drove along. You chatting at the wheel.
I can't describe just how good. I began to feel)
Then thst would lead into something like:
chorus
I wanted love right then
Wanted your sweet kiss
How long had it been
Since I'd felt like this?
I still recall the feelng. when I reminiss
My heart cried out. "Give me love right now."
This would sugest the following chorus' would alter to fit the proggresin but I think that would work pretty good.
Never thought you were the mentioned guy. Think I still have his email from a debate we had.
Keep at it
Graham
Posted on May 18, 2000, 7:08 PM from IP address 206.135.142.18