Bill,
I've condensed and rearranged some below. Looking forward to doing your demo
V1 (I flipped lines here)
Sometime(s) I hide my feelings
(And--delete) become(ing) miserably out of touch
When we met at the dance I was lonely
(I--delete) didn't really know how much
V2
But we got along fine and friendly
In self-doubt,I expected less
You said`Let's go to a house party'
It was easy to say yes
Ramp
As we drove along,like a country song
A strong feeling came over me:
chorus
I love right now
Want your sweet kiss
How long has it been
Since I('ve--delete) felt like this?
How could I live,with all this love I miss?
O love, give me love right now
V3
But when we got to the party,you vanished!
(Ah,--delete)might have figured as much,you see
(I was--delete) alone and used to the feeling
I cooled immediately
V4
Then I saw you politely mingling
And my mind came out of it's freeze
Like magic you appeared before me
Jingling lovely car keys
Ramp
And as we drove along like a country song
That strong feeling overtook me:
chorus
I love right now
Want your sweet kiss
How long has it been
Since I('ve--delete) felt like this
How could I live,with all this love I miss
O love,give me love right now
V5
We drove down the road to your place
You invited me up for tea
(Suddenly--move) I was (suddenly) wrapped in your loving arms
(And--delete) from its cage my heart flew free
Posted on May 19, 2000, 1:34 PM from IP address 206.65.217.16
