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Paul I like this. Just on nit.
"Mama's end was coming at the age of sixty-three.
We all knew the time was near and we prayed to give her peace."
Would be good to show why you thought her end was comming. Something like:
Mama became very(? better word) ill when she turned 63...
Good luck with this.
Gaby



Posted on May 20, 2000, 4:38 PM
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