Damn, this "Drinkin' Song's" almost "TOO Cerebral!"

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Well, Fellow Uncle, Noone can accuse you of
Writin' This for "Johnny 6-Pack"!

(Regret I can't yet hear the Melody, as I'm
not Cerebral-Enuf to operate a Full-Blown
Computer & Webtv has it's Musical Limitations)

So, sans Melody, my Sleep Deprived Brain skids
on lines like "I'd lose you to who I can't be"
WOW, if the Singer an come up with Stuff Like
THIS While "Under The Influence",he'll
CERTAINLY Be a "KEEPER" when he Sobers Up!

Maybe it's just the "Bubba" in me, but "Left
me the Key to my own Inner Door" rings a Tad
Stilted too....

Don't get me Wrong...I most ALWAYS Like Your
Songs...maybe I just need More Morning Coffee!
Let's see what Others Say!

Best Wishes/ Big Guy-Hug!
Stan



Posted on May 24, 2000, 11:41 AM
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