anthony,this is my first critiqueso if i'm mistaken please let me know .had trouble with lines.
How can you leave me this way .{question} what way was that ?
I'm blessed by the time ? maybe i'm blessed by god
I said something without thinking about you ?
Maybe i thinking about your feelings
If she left how can he be talking to her.I guess he's kneeling at her grave
Contact me perhaps a seance i don't know about that.
You wish you can join her .maybe you can take sleeping pills or shoot yourself .
Perhaps all these sound ridiculous but it's my humble opinion .wayne
Posted on May 26, 2000, 2:01 AM from IP address 205.188.197.39