ALMOST "Otherworldly!"

The "Contact Me" Line...

Otherwise, Great Almost-"Twisty"... Ending!

You've actually Set Us Up Pretty Well for it, but that "Contact me" if you can...Line is, for me, the Line that Cloys...

It feels "Sarcastic"...when the Ending is Revealled!

Would Perhaps "Be a Reief" to find out Her Demise was "By Accident," rather than "Self-Inflicted"...too.

Real Interesting Angle, Pretty Well-Presented!
Near-"KUDOS!" Already!

Big Guy-Hug!
Stan

Posted on May 26, 2000, 3:53 AM
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