...I reversed lines 1 & 2 with lines 3 & 4 and tweaked a little bit to give it a stronger beginning (IMO)
(All those--replace--You made) empty promises
(while--replace--Lying) naked in my bed
Lately I’ve been thinking
About (the--replace--those) things you said
Posted on Nov 30, 2000, 11:23 AM from IP address 206.65.223.6
