A friend always has the right to ask.

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G'day Letty.
From someone who is also otherwise occupied just now. It happens, and a friend is always a friend.
You more than carry your weight when you are about, so don't sweat it Dear.
Always a pleasure to read your stuff.
Now.
Few spots in this nice one I found a bit forced and will cut and paste to demo.
Regards.
Graham
Without You
Letty Marsha Girardet © December 2000

(verse)
You never promised anything
You were honest form the start
You said you loved me
But you would be
Nothing but a lover in the dark

Someone who'd come
When there was no one else around
Just touching ground
With love

(chorus)
Sometimes you're here
Sometimes you're not
I hear the ticking of the clock…
WAITING for your call
Sometimes it comes
Sometimes it goes
On beating till I'm still alone…
Without you.

THE COMES AND GOES LINES ABOVE SEEM TO BE SWITHCHING SUBJECTS FROM THE CALL TO THE CLOCK TO ME LETTY
aND THE 'TIL I'M STILL BIT DOESN'T READ RIGHT TO ME.
(verse)
Love with you is like a dream
Why do you keep me from your heart?
Where I long to see
A place for me
You've filled with everything we are

A place I've won
Cause no one else has truly found
The you that abounds
With love

HERE DEAR, i HAVE TO ASK. HAS SHE TRUELY FOUND THE TRUE HIM?
AND DOES LOVE TRUELY ABOUND IN A HEART THAT LAYS CONDITIONS?
(repeat chorus)

(bridge)
Should I say that it's over?
Should I say: "My love's taking cover"
From things you don't do
From the price that I pay
From all the times it's made me say

(chorus)
Sometimes you're here
Sometimes you're not
I hear the ticking of the clock…
I wait for your call
Sometimes it comes
Sometimes it goes
On beating till I'm still alone…

Without you (backing vocals repeat each time)
(tag)
Without you
Without you… (without you)
Without you… (without you)

(climb)
Without you…

(repeat chorus and tag until fade)




Posted on Dec 2, 2000, 5:34 PM
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