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  • Cute indeed.....

      • Posted Nov 30, 2000 10:52 PM

      I won't say too much about this song, since it's already "in the can", except to say that it works fairly well. I'd rather read "my whole life" than the more formal-sounding "a lifetime", but that's just me. And two "say"s in the first two lines of the chorus seems repetitive, but besides that, this is a winner! I especially like that twist in the end.
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