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  • A friend always has the right to ask.

    • Posted Dec 2, 2000 5:34 PM

      G'day Letty.
      From someone who is also otherwise occupied just now. It happens, and a friend is always a friend.
      You more than carry your weight when you are about, so don't sweat it Dear.
      Always a pleasure to read your stuff.
      Now.
      Few spots in this nice one I found a bit forced and will cut and paste to demo.
      Regards.
      Graham
      Without You
      Letty Marsha Girardet © December 2000

      (verse)
      You never promised anything
      You were honest form the start
      You said you loved me
      But you would be
      Nothing but a lover in the dark

      Someone who'd come
      When there was no one else around
      Just touching ground
      With love

      (chorus)
      Sometimes you're here
      Sometimes you're not
      I hear the ticking of the clock…
      WAITING for your call
      Sometimes it comes
      Sometimes it goes
      On beating till I'm still alone…
      Without you.

      THE COMES AND GOES LINES ABOVE SEEM TO BE SWITHCHING SUBJECTS FROM THE CALL TO THE CLOCK TO ME LETTY
      aND THE 'TIL I'M STILL BIT DOESN'T READ RIGHT TO ME.
      (verse)
      Love with you is like a dream
      Why do you keep me from your heart?
      Where I long to see
      A place for me
      You've filled with everything we are

      A place I've won
      Cause no one else has truly found
      The you that abounds
      With love

      HERE DEAR, i HAVE TO ASK. HAS SHE TRUELY FOUND THE TRUE HIM?
      AND DOES LOVE TRUELY ABOUND IN A HEART THAT LAYS CONDITIONS?
      (repeat chorus)

      (bridge)
      Should I say that it's over?
      Should I say: "My love's taking cover"
      From things you don't do
      From the price that I pay
      From all the times it's made me say

      (chorus)
      Sometimes you're here
      Sometimes you're not
      I hear the ticking of the clock…
      I wait for your call
      Sometimes it comes
      Sometimes it goes
      On beating till I'm still alone…

      Without you (backing vocals repeat each time)
      (tag)
      Without you
      Without you… (without you)
      Without you… (without you)

      (climb)
      Without you…

      (repeat chorus and tag until fade)
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