Gosh. I thought I was the only one who was buried up to the chin
Posted Dec 5, 2000 1:00 AM
in the seeming quicksand of life (it IS only an illusion though).
But having got the contest out of the way, which was a HECK of a lot of work. (almost done with that. Just one more step, plus the DEMO to do (Ooooh...fun!) and thanks for being great sports everybody and playing along). And having got a few other important projects wrapped up and embarked upon something simple and solid for a few weeks, I feel better. Not so much stress and time again (I hope) for some "old" friends.
Having said that.
Letty. I love your song. I think it is utterly beautiful. I liked Graham's suggestion "waiting for your call" but think it might be better as "wishing you would call", and I understand his concern with the seeming subject change in the chorus. But I love the second verse just the way it is. I understood it perfectly.
Thinking further for the chorus how about;
chorus)
Sometimes you're here
Sometimes you're not
I hear the ticking of the clock…
Sometimes you come
Sometimes you go
But my heart keeps beating, even alone
Or thinking even further... Maybe not.
If I'm not careful. I'll change your song!
Anyway, just a couple of comments. Wanted to say Hi and say, I've been in the same boat.
