Im working on my Feb. bait (couldnt submit on time for this month). Can anybody read my first draft and provide some feedback. Leave email, thxxx.

It's a parallel biopic of the creators of Hershey and Mars Chocolate, focused on their rivalry and corporate battles.

I know I'm new maia, but I'd love to read your bait. My email is ryannnash@comcast.net. When I finish my baits would you like to read them and critique them for me?

Ok, sure. I can also read yours if you like. Ill email you in a sec Ryan.

If you allow me, I will read it and give feedback as well Maia.

jerkwod_djh@yahoo.com

Sent, thanks in advance guys.

Sent you my review Maia.

And no problem. I love getting early glimpses.

That was fast, just sent u another email.

Ryan c. did u get my bait? Thx

i'd LOVE to give you a review, Maia, if you still wanted one..

Ok, cool Evan, but what is your email address?

Anyone else?

I've heard good things, i would love to review it for you
tocsinproductions@gmail.com

Sent Adrian. Thanx everyone for your help (Evan, your email pls!)

oh im so sorry Maia!!!!
edunbar@beaconschool.org

Thx, sent. Ok, this forum is getting long; just need to know if ryan c. got my email? peace.

Yes maia, I got your email and am making some notes for you. When I finish the rough draft of my baits for feb. I'll email you them and you can send me some feedback on them as well.

Maia, I would love to read your bait, please. You can also read my draft as well I'm planning on coming back February.

Ok TD, since I havent received everyones feedback. I could really use your help and Ill happy to give you feedback too. Whats the email address?

coolsanders@hotmail.com

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