Feedback for February January 15 2009 at 11:30 PMNo score for this post Maia (no login )
Im working on my Feb. bait (couldnt submit on time for this month). Can anybody read my first draft and provide some feedback. Leave email, thxxx.
Author Reply Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 15 2009, 11:31 PM
It's a parallel biopic of the creators of Hershey and Mars Chocolate, focused on their rivalry and corporate battles.
ryan c
(Login ryannnash ) me No score for this post January 15 2009, 11:34 PM
I know I'm new maia, but I'd love to read your bait. My email is ryannnash@comcast.net. When I finish my baits would you like to read them and critique them for me?
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 15 2009, 11:40 PM
Ok, sure. I can also read yours if you like. Ill email you in a sec Ryan.
Douglas Reese
(Login Douglas_Reese ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 15 2009, 11:42 PM
If you allow me, I will read it and give feedback as well Maia.
jerkwod_djh@yahoo.com
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 12:24 AM
Sent, thanks in advance guys.
Douglas Reese
(Login Douglas_Reese ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 12:35 AM
Sent you my review Maia.
And no problem. I love getting early glimpses.
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 12:50 AM
That was fast, just sent u another email.
Ryan c. did u get my bait? Thx
Evan (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 6:39 AM
i'd LOVE to give you a review, Maia, if you still wanted one..
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 4:30 PM
Ok, cool Evan, but what is your email address?
Anyone else?
Adrian James
(Login aronofsky_fanPI ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 4:33 PM
I've heard good things, i would love to review it for you
tocsinproductions@gmail.com
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 4:47 PM
Sent Adrian. Thanx everyone for your help (Evan, your email pls!)
Evan (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 4:55 PM
oh im so sorry Maia!!!!
edunbar@beaconschool.org
Maia (no login ) Re: Feedback for February No score for this post January 16 2009, 5:08 PM
Thx, sent. Ok, this forum is getting long; just need to know if ryan c. got my email? peace.
ryan c
(Login ryannnash ) yes No score for this post January 16 2009, 6:36 PM
Yes maia, I got your email and am making some notes for you. When I finish the rough draft of my baits for feb. I'll email you them and you can send me some feedback on them as well.
T.D. (Login Sanders17 ) Re: yes No score for this post January 18 2009, 7:22 AM
Maia, I would love to read your bait, please. You can also read my draft as well I'm planning on coming back February.
Maia (no login ) Re: yes No score for this post January 18 2009, 11:10 AM
Ok TD, since I havent received everyones feedback. I could really use your help and Ill happy to give you feedback too. Whats the email address?
T.D. (Login Sanders17 ) Re: yes No score for this post January 18 2009, 11:45 AM
coolsanders@hotmail.com
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