I think it would help to include one shot in the series that provides a better sense of scale - i.e. taken from further away or with less zoom and/or a scale reference (paint tin).
I imagine this looks superb in person as, when I look at the image in PS at 75 percent of its current size and use the sharpen tool, it looks much better. Viewed here, the pictures look too soft.
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