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Re: to you & your world back home.

July 5 2009 at 7:56 PM
 


Response to to you & your world back home.

 

'so i pull a match out
from one of the books of the places
i knew in my past.
light & exhale the bitter swirls
that once intertwined the ideas
you and i had...
in a shitty bed
in an even shittier house
that i'd never consider home.'

That run of words i loved. the memories coming back as something simple as lighting a cigarette triggers the thoughts to swirl through your mind. Excellent. Really made me think as i read it about my life and my past.
Great Job.
Thanks for sharing

 
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