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How come no comments on poems???

November 2 2009 at 7:41 AM
Steerpike 


Response to winter ramblings

 

Great writing. Full of longing.
Loved both;
i dont want to have to try so hard
i just want to be
and i want you to be here

and the very last line. Both simple and still so beautifully poetic.

Why so few comments on poems??

 
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