another frightened reflection Posted Jul 4, 2009 8:36 PM
again... I hope my comments again be taken seriously,
because I'm always telling you I love your work,
but I loved this too...
It's weird,
but when I got to the part about the "anointed holla back girl"
I sort of took her for a
modern day Joan of Arc sort...
especially with your earlier christian references...
is this way off?
because I really liked that idea...
only,
this being modern day, i took her as far less innoncent
than the actual joan of arc
and thus a conundrum. (which I loved)
Anyway,
as a whole...
the rhyme scheme was great
the flow was consistent
and the meloncholy nature really sat with what i love about poetry.
