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Insomnia

September 28 2009 at 2:25 PM
Maria 

 





Sleeping in the middle of the bed
there's no my side/your side
when you're gone

I sleep alone
or I try
but the ghosts of my past are lurking
in the shadows
and you're gone

I can't sleep alone




There's no my side/your side
when you're not home
I never could sleep alone

and then he moves inside of me and
remind me I'll never be alone again
and you'll be home

for the first time I know
someone will come
& you will love me-







 
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another frightened reflection

Re: Insomnia

September 29 2009, 4:39 PM 

Maria -

wonderful to read you too

i know the feelings this piece conveys all too well.

loved the spacing...
the short, concise stanzas...
and of course... the imagery

smile
sarah

 
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Re: Insomnia

September 30 2009, 10:47 PM 

really liked this Maria,...one of my favorites by you i think.

 
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