Lisa's Counting Crows Shrine

 


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Crows

September 30 2009 at 11:17 AM
 

 
Crows fly into the sun
Like they did when we were young
And when the day is done
They are not the only ones
Who find their answers in the sky
A savior of a different kind
I push off in the passenger side
While my trailer trash angel takes me for a ride

Sandpaper is feeling smooth
Bathing in sunshine this afternoon
So peaceful I can barely move
Just lay with me baby we can dig this groove

She pulled the curtains and the streetlights shone
Into the room where I was getting stoned
She laid in my arms but I was still alone
Lost in my mind just counting crows
Cause I look in her eyes and I can plainly see
She wants more drugs and maybe me
I fall down to my knees
Screaming this isn't the way it was supposed to be

Can you kill me just one more time?
I'm so empty just one more line
Surely you could put me to sleep
Baby put me to sleep

 
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wow

September 30 2009, 11:32 AM 

Beautiful, Just Beautiful!!!!

 
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jOsH

Re: Crows

September 30 2009, 10:35 PM 

She laid in my arms but I was still alone



I cant even come close to telling you how much i can relate to that line.

Nice bit of writing here.

 
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another frightened reflection

Re: Crows

October 1 2009, 3:15 PM 

"she pulled the curtains and the streetlights shone
into the room where i was getting stoned
she laid in my arms bu i was still alone
lost in my mind just counting crows"

... the rhyming along made me want to print this out and tack it to my wall

but then your final stanza hit my eyes
and i fell in love with this

beautiful, serene writing, sir
smile
Sarah

 
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Con

Re: Crows

October 4 2009, 7:21 PM 

It rhymes so beautifully. I love it

 
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