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a midday unfinished thought.

September 30 2009 at 8:42 PM
Hillary 

 
somewhere west of here
leaves are falling,

& i have nothing romantic scribbled down
on coffee-stained napkins
from corner cafes about them.

i don't know what color they turned.
what they sound like,
smell like,

but i could guess.

compare them to a memory,
your hair or a campfire.

give them a soundtrack.
a title.
a purpose.

an audience
ready with applause.


sometimes we are
those leaves falling.


sometimes it's okay to be off the record.

unobserved, and left alone to our own travels.





 
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jOsH

Re: a midday unfinished thought.

September 30 2009, 10:31 PM 

i don't know if this makes sense, but this was a great collaboration of keywords,.....all the things that make up a memory

 
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another frightened reflection

Re: a midday unfinished thought.

October 1 2009, 3:18 PM 

these words were staggered
like a couple of couples
passing around a paper bag clad bottle of vino...

...content and warm in their current state

...and josh was right,
that's exactly how a memory is

 
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Con

Re: a midday unfinished thought.

October 4 2009, 7:20 PM 

Sometimes we are those leaves falling

 
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tanner

Re: a midday unfinished thought.

October 17 2009, 1:24 PM 

i loved this hillary. fantastic and refreshing fall poem.

 
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