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tributary veinsSeptember 30 2009 at 10:30 PM | jOsH |
| He drinks his
Way into tomorrow
Swollen eyes and
Shaky hands
Tell the tales.
Partially. Part.
Of the story's
Stem broke mid-
Dream; part lost
In the iris
Damaged by a
Body of a boy
That rises too
Early to place
Emphasis on sleep
Or Anything, and
Anyways he's got
Nowhere to go
The gin blossoming
On his sad smile
The sun setting like
Seduction into clouds
Like sheets. Wel-
Coming skin. |
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another frightened reflection
| Re: tributary veins | October 1 2009, 3:20 PM |
josh...
i so want to collaborate with you someday
(maybe at roo)
you're mind is brilliant
this calmed me down ha
smile |
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seashelllz
| multiple times | October 4 2009, 11:41 AM |
i've read this a bunch of times now and i just like it more each time! it's very cool, reminds me of beat-style poetry, loved the short couplets and the ending, especially! |
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tanner
| Re: tributary veins | October 17 2009, 1:35 PM |
great use of rhythm in this josh. loved it. | |
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