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if you knew

October 23 2009 at 12:21 AM
sespy 

 
if you knew how to whistle
would you not sing?

over the dusty rooftops
and crops that cry for rain

if you knew where to find me
would i still hide?

to keep yours, yours
and mine, mine

if you knew this would end
would you bring me in
again?

 
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Steerpike

Re: if you knew

November 2 2009, 7:37 AM 

Short, but strong.
I particularly liked the lines:

if you knew where to find me
would i still hide?

Sounds sad and resigned, but very poetic.

 
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