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Hey, Dumbo.....

August 6 2012 at 12:25 PM
Anonymous 


Response to think what you will

I used two adjectives - abundance and both (both might be an adverb in this case. Any English teachers out there). You definitely used three - short, another, superior. It is the overuse of adjectives that one needs to worry about. Based on your logic, what does that make you? You also need to capitalize the first word of a sentence. I could go on, but you get the picture.

 
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  1. pLEASE GO ON - Anonymous on Aug 6, 1:31 PM
    1. Hey numb-skull, you brought it up. - Anonymous on Aug 6, 2:47 PM
      1. suggest you seek counseling - Anonymous on Aug 6, 2:56 PM
     
  2. ok bud - Anonymous on Aug 6, 2:55 PM
    1. You are so easily angered. - Anonymous on Aug 6, 3:09 PM
      1. so you got "anger" out of that? - Anonymous on Aug 7, 5:46 AM
        1. and 'hater' and 'racist' (nm) - Anonymous on Aug 7, 1:01 PM
          1. speak for yourself - Anonymous on Aug 7, 2:53 PM
        2. There you go again..... - Anonymous on Aug 7, 3:09 PM
          1. at least its a tree - Anonymous on Aug 8, 7:03 AM
            1. So you believe in evolution? - Anonymous on Aug 8, 9:23 AM
              1. try not to be - Anonymous on Aug 8, 9:49 AM
     
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