Good poem

It's a good poem. Maybe lost love would have been a better. Appeals to pity tend to make people think alot more. Then there is always a flip side to the coin as well we don't have to pity anyone who we don't want to pity. Frankly if your trying to get peoples attention it is best to talk with them person to person. If that fails then your pretty fuck$#.

Call Racheal too looks like you need someone to talk with. If not her than somebody who cares and has time to talk things out with you. You still need help and alchool won't help. Your wound is very deep from whatever happened to you and if you don't take care of it the wound will fester and become even worse. Sometimes people never recover don't let this happen to you, you have your whole life ahead of you and maybe even some dreams to chase. You need at least need to talk with people that you trust and can talk with.

-Warblurs Rapsody