it has no title, and it is no place near being finished... i could just use some feedback.

my modern day mona lisa...
that beautiful smile that can pierce the heart of the sun rise...
eyes that shed emotion back into my heart...
all the things that i can not show you even through this painting...
i just want you to know i would give my soul to know for one moment that you always loved me and not another...
the disillusion of what i want, and what the harsh reality is...
the butterfly smiles before it screams...
bursting my ear drums, and shattering my state of mind....