| I tried to hear her voice as I wrote this...not sure how well I did, but I like the poemOctober 6 2000 at 9:14 PM |
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Response to Tori-style line |
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And the leaves play with me
Like the autumn on your face
I can creep like cellophane
And hold you in my chase
Return to the hereafter
And please remember when
You wrote me like a serial whore
Dripping from your pen
It’s not as easy as the morning
When I catch you in my head
Shivering the midnight afterglow
Like nakedness on my bed
And the leaves wink death upon me
Like autumn on your face
I peek from within your shadow
You’re my favourite hiding place
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| Responses- Damn! - J.M. Nickerson on Oct 10, 2000
- wow - raven on Apr 10, 2001
- wow - kat samar on Jun 13, 2001
- touching - fiza on Aug 19, 2001
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