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finish this, please!!!!!!!?

August 23 2001 at 3:47 PM
 

 

i honestly tried to finish this poem. I got to about two stanzas but i just can't get any more words to finish it. try it.
I run wild
through the silver gurgling creek
it laughs at me
i laugh with it

captured by my responsibilities
aged by my emotions
my heart runs free
to where i cannot be

wish you luck!!!

 
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