Yo!
Don't worry about that weird girl from uh, "Bantam" publishing or wherever. I'm webmistress of the site I Wanna Be With You and I have read a lot of fan fiction. I can truthfully say that yours is one of the best. It is written with creativity, clarity and a vividness that comes from a great imagination. It's original and always keeps me waiting for the next update. I had been searching around for some good, QUALITY fan fiction and I am really glad I found it.
Thanks again, and update soon!
Alyssa
I Wanna Be With You