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Bah, a good story can be improved by form, but good form can never save a bad story.

September 2 2001 at 8:06 AM
Hammerskjold  (no login)
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To put it politely, you can't polish a turd. And your story is the total opposite of turd. Making it the anti-turd..hmm, that didn't come out right.
If you enjoy writing your story, by all means please continue, I definitely enjoy reading them.

Ps. The flashback to Griswold telling the young rogue about the path of the heart is quite good. Never knew that price gouging blade monger had a soul

 
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