That's CUTE!!!!!
He looks kinda gentle and she looks really stubborn, very Mulan-like!
Hey, I know you should put that up on your site, and upload the rest of it (I want updates!)
I like the pic!

Eh, seriously, though, I've been working on a new layout.... nothing special, I'm just going to make it a little spiffier.
I'll let you know when I update

BTW, if anyone could give me any ideas for the next part of my story, it would be greatly appreciated.

I wouldn't have a clue! About the story that is. Sorry!
I say it's about time, someone else helped you! I mean come on, I am started to feel bossy, telling you what to do.
But the one thing I do know, is that you should make something that hasn't happened in Mulan fanfics yet, like really BIG!!!
That will shock every one, what da ya reckon?

I think something BIG would be to have a main character die [I'm one for gore & death, go figure], but I dunno who... any ideas?

(I don't actually but I'm warning you!)
If you kill off Shang, watch out!
Kill off the gang of three or something, that will hurt alot of people